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Offline StevesWeb

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Bike Ride
« on: December 08, 2010, 09:41:59 PM »
I walk outside with you
Two steps behind
Staring at the ground
Hoping

It's a small bike
One hundred twenty ccs
Spare helmet, thank you
I cling to you as we fly

Face against your jacket
Arms around your waist
Free in the wind
You smell wonderful

Thanks for the ride
Will I see you again ?
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Re: Bike Ride
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2010, 09:59:35 PM »
Delightful  :) Brought a smile to my face! Thanks for sharing

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Re: Bike Ride
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2010, 10:04:21 PM »
Delightful  :) Brought a smile to my face! Thanks for sharing

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.
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Re: Bike Ride
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2010, 10:06:02 PM »
Delightful  :) Brought a smile to my face! Thanks for sharing

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.

Inspired me to post some of my old song lyrics too!

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Re: Bike Ride
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 06:44:24 AM »
It's a nice poem, but I thought it was about a bicycle until I read it again. :D That's probably a failing on my part, though - I have bike on the brain (not literally, otherwise I wouldn't be typing this, I'm pretty sure).
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